by Easy Street
This is just one long jerk-off scene, which may be the intent. No story at all. That's too bad because you write well, but this one lacks storytelling. I'll definitely check out your other tales.
Good writing. 5 stars.
Expecting Abby to become more and more Shane's lover, and that her lust is becoming more and more to him.
Badass sexy story. Great vibe between a bunch of enjoyable and kinky characters. I love the sex positive feel.
Yeah, kind of hot, but I don't understand the thought of her doing sexual things with her boyfriend without the husband there. Aren't they married? Shouldn't their sex life be shared together. That's my line. I understand sharing but for both not to be there together, that's cheating in the emotional relationship sense. It means that they are putting their own individual desires above the relationship. At that point, why be married? Just get a divorce and have fun fucking around. For me, they should keep whatever they do together so both can respectively and mutually enjoy.
Do you already have a release date for the next update? I think this series is super hot and I am really curious how it progresses. I check your profile almost daily to look for an update^^ Again 5 stars for this one. Thank you for writing!