All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 02'

well written.....thank you

I enjoy the way that you write. It's as if I am actually watching it happen. The situation, the individuals reservation and kind of caution about what is going to happen, very nice. When the story ended I was happy for both of them, and it's not because I'm a guy but because I felt that I was watching two people bridge a gap that seemed to be so natural. Thanks