by WildRose40DDD
i liked the substance and idea behind the story, the sex was pretty good but the iteraction was way too short...the story was too short...you ot her on a boat?take the boat for a spin...out beyond the 25 mile range, scare her into submission,your in the ocean..you are shark bait without that boat so the scenaro is good but the story lie needs to be expanded..you could have her making you the most popular boat in the area just by the ondeck action.