All Comments on 'Abduction'

Interestingly kinky albeit somewhat short. It is a promising start to a good story but only time will tell.

What makes it Erotic Horror (rather than a standard Hucow fetish saga) is that there is no story. There is no revelation, merely the certainty of lonely helpless hopeless pleasure...

Uh huh :-O now what did I just read. Awwwwwful. But brilliant.

Kinda awful... just what I was going for.

Just what I was looking for, excellent short story

Happy to provide...

I admire your tough self-view and the subtle description from within you, from your deliciously wounded soul. I love your choice of words so much - all of it is so beautifully formulated with care: gently tender in the words of the helpless victim of the merciless extradition and roughly tackling the desires of a teased woman. A delight to read, this declaration of love to the hands that locked your belt.

Horror raised to art! :- )

Thank you for your kind words.

This story makes me think of Cube, where a group of strangers have to navigate a maze of often deadly cubes, and the idea behind it is that the maze exists simply because it could, a monstrous child of an unthinking bureaucratic mechanism. Here there are no captors gloating over our heroine's predicament and delighting in her helpless pleasure and cruel shame...

A good thought to process the idea of Cube in your mind environment. I look forward to your first text version of this dramatic picture.

The situation is so horrible that I didn’t want to find it erotic, but you pieced together the moment when she was in the wall too well for me not to. It’s an excellent bite sized piece of erotic horror.

"I didn’t want to find it erotic, but..." is my favourite kind of comment, so thanks!

Erotic and terrifying in equal measures.

Thank you for reading, for commenting, and hopefully enjoying, despite...

Oh so many questions lurking here. None of them answered, just left to play on my unwillingly-aroused mind. Wonderful!

I like how the 750 word limit works in the story's favour.

not bad but way too short. Want MORE please

Both erotic and yet a nightmare horror. Brilliant short, thanks.