All Comments on 'Abigail Chained in Lust Ch. 01'

A frum Literotica writer?! Pischu li sha'arei gehenim

Very good writing and a terrific story.

I love how you didn't "sugar coat" anything - neither the characters nor their behaviour is in any way glamourous, not even in a "scandalous sexy" kind of way.

Even the protagonist is not entirely sympathetic (in the way she thinks about other people) but if anything that only makes her more endearing. Fun trash people all around. _Human_ people.

The part about disposing of the evidence I could not read, but that has nothing to do with your skills, that's just something I personally cannot handle in any story.