All Comments on 'Abigail in Trouble Ch. 04: Nightclub Nightmare'

please write more

can't wait for the next chapter

Please write more.

Great story, love to read about wearing a garter and real nylons and pleated, satin mini skirt.

Please use the words satin and silk more in description of the girl's blouse, skirt or dress.

'She felt his hands rubbing her tits over the shiny, satin material of her see through blouse'

How about: She wore one of her shortest skirts. Her satin pleated mini skirt was so short it didn't cover the tops of her silk stockings and the straps of her satin garter belt.

I found the repetitive use of the word cervix ignorant and redundant.

Also not nearly enough reluctance or crying. This girl has been on 4 different occasions within a month 3 by her father's associates but still no connection. My biggest complaints.