All Comments on 'Abigail's Demon, Ch. 03'

by cunwitch

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used2bjustjused2bjustjabout 1 year ago

Another amazing chapter. The dialog is just funny as hell. Please keep writing this series.

I think you are among the best writers on this site.

5/5

J

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

God, I love the interplay between these two

CarchariasCarchariasabout 1 year ago

"Your demon magic is no match for the sheer power of my shitty life decisions."

I felt that one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What a sweet and funny story! Best couple ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fucking adorable, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Smiled the entire time while reading this chapter; what a sugar rush. -Spider

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

These two are fucking hilarious. I am surprised they aren’t the stars of a UK television show or at least a weekly radio program. You have to keep this weirdness going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A-Mazing story. 🥰

I LOVE the witty banter and snappy repartee. The “tongue in cheek” 😜 comments and the sheer joy of the dialogue. Gasp 😮 THANK you so much for sharing your joy and humor with the rest of us

- pal

lc69hunterlc69hunter12 months ago

I am loving this

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Happy sex! More please!

ContrahentContrahent12 months ago

Your metaphors are adorkable. Your characters are amazing.

I am giving this story a five-starring. Take THAT, you writer, you!

MelanPoncaMelanPonca12 months ago

Dear wonderful Cunwitch,

Gut-busting, snorting-while-wiping-the-tears-from-my-eyes, laugh-out-loud funny: such is my delight in your depiction of Abigail’s emotional outbursts. How you find these gems, or create them whole cloth, is as profoundly mysterious as alchemy to me. GREAT work!

Please continue your superb efforts!

Sincerely,

Mel

HasdrubalClitomachusHasdrubalClitomachus10 months ago

Hoping you choose to write more of this

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Dear universe it’s been 5 months… has she forgotten us?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

For what it’s worth, the people want more.

PhineasPhineas6 months ago
Just wow

Okay, not just... Wow and a whole lot more. This is a very fun story! Sure, the sloppy sex is wonderful and all, but the way you've shown Abigail is artful. My hat is off to you, dear author... and like others have said, please give us more of Abigail and Odal.

Especially given the tease I chose to interpret as Abigail's desires and selfless interest in Odal's pleasure and well being to a possibility of turning her into a real girl.

CarchariasCarcharias4 months ago

The author’s profile on Hentai Foundry has five more chapters of this story posted, as well as more of her works. It is well worth creating an account for. Abigail’s Demon and The Bad Dragon are my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Carcharias, HF stories search says "No results found" for cunwitch or Abigail's Demon.

CarchariasCarcharias7 days ago

Don’t know if Literotica lets me post links, but try this. You need an account to see her stories. And have the correct filters turned on/off. If you don’t have it set to show explicit stuff I don’t think you’ll be able to see her posts.

https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/cunwitch/profile

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImagination7 days ago

Wow! This is the best one so far. Luxuriate in the bliss of success as long as you like. We will wait anxiously the next chapter.

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