All Comments on 'About to Burst'

I don't normally care for 2nd person stories, but now and then they do well and surprise me. This is one such case. It definitely deserves a full-fledged 5, despite its shortness and present-tense. It was raw, vivid detail and description of a man's encounter with his sub/slave and shows the kind of BDSM sex that makes the public scorn worthwhile. I fully enjoyed reading about him teasing her to an orgasm of that nature. I would strongly recommend this tale as being in the top of the smut sort of story.

Have you posted this on iTaboo.com? I think you should