All Comments on 'Accepting the Asian Role Ch. 01'

The premise has potential, but I feel like your writing lacks something for me personally. I love the setup, but the actual scenes feel kinda like telling, not showing. Also, I feel like it’s “too easy” for the first conquest. Rather, a slow degradation/moral degeneration is way hotter imo. The inner turmoil is part of what makes this genre so great.