All Comments on 'Accidental Contact Pt. 01'

3 stars so far - there needs to be a lot more detail about each of the main characters and their surrounding relationships. This does not appear to be a relationship between two single consenting adults for it to be in the LW section. I am going to assume the woman is married and that will be the focus of the next chapter.

Please try to keep each chapter submitted here to less than a week or better yet, put the whole story in as complete rather than spaced out over weeks. Readers here tend to lose interest pretty fast.

Don't need to see more. Cheating assholes. Nuff said.