by beaverhunt
So hot when father admitted to being brother and sister.
... because stores such as this more rightly belong in the 'fetish' category - and, when they show up here, it pisses me off.
Lol...it seems this chapter is to piss off all those detractors who don’t think this should be posted as an incest story! Fuck ‘em!
I liked the story, but the parents revelation came out of the blue and wasn’t very natural as part of this story. You could have left it out there just as them commenting on the cranberry juice, and then fleshed it out as a separate chapter.
Oh, and went drinking piss, it’s best to use a plastic or paper cup. Glass cools the piss too quickly and cold piss is nasty!
First, this story has piss in the fucking title you moron, so if that’s not your cup of tea, move on to another story. If the moderators didn’t think it belonged here, they wouldn’t have approved it. You’re just being a vindictive prick, who probably has a very small one, since you hide behind the anonymous post.
ASSHOLE!
Great Story!
Got my 5* Stars!
Loved the way you introduced the parents too!
Hope they have more active participation on the next stories
Aunt Helena
Portugal
This chapter was a bit disappointing; the natural progression and eroticism vanished, and it became almost cliché. Brother and sister fall in love, parents also incestuous, approve, without plot or character development. To make the transition. I see there are already more chapters here, and look forward to seeing what happens next, but I fear that this story has peaked for me.