by ColdCat
This was (and is) a wonderful, touching story. Keep 'em coming.
Great to see some love and the realities of life in addition to the sex.
A beautiful tale that kept my eyes glued to the screen. and not just because of the sex, which was also terrific. keep it up.
Your story was beautiful and well written. I liked how this story focused on Kate and Alex's relationship and some of the realities of living a gay lifestyle rather than focusing purely on the sexual. I love how you expressed that Alex was Kate's "one" at the conclusion. Wonderful! I look forward to reading more of your stories!
You seem to have a natural way of capturing the true essence of a relationship. I agree the descriptive sex was great, but I love your ability to draw the reader into your story. I think you could make the instructions on a model airplane seem exciting.
I would love to see you put your talents towards a love story in the supernatural venue, maybe something with Weres or Vamps would be fun. There is so much ordinary stuff and you have the ability to take a real stroll outside the box. (Sorry, my request is indulgent, but it's one of my own guilty pleasures)
Looking forward to your next story!
Dear ColdCat,
Started reading the first story because I had 10 minutes to kill - had to read them all and made myself late! I love the story and I love the way your writing is descriptive and full of feeling with no pretensions. Loved the sex but paled into insignificance next to the relationship - was dying for them to work it out, guess I'm a sucker for a happy ending!
xx
I was praying for them to overcome this and ignore the evil stepmother! They are perfect for each other. Great story! I loved it, but for some reason I am unable to vote tonight. Probably my computer. I will give 5 stars as soon as I'm able. ~ L
A wonderful story that was so emotionally engaging, I actually felt myself tearing up a few times. Thank you so much! I know it's been almost a couple of years, but I very much look forward to more of your work and hope you will submit some for us to enjoy.
There is always the chance that a series like this ends without a working reconciliation. I hate those. They happen too often in real life, in my opinion. I love the stories (and real lives) where they find a way to make it work. I know, I know, sometimes break-ups are for the better. I'm just hopelessly romantic. Thanks for helping them work it out for the better. I love this series.
I am lost for words - that's how wonderfully written it is.
thank you for sharing an absolutely beautiful story! *breaks into a warm smile*
<3
Thank you.
You made me feel the love, so tangible. I actually forgot there was sex in this story. That is because it wasn't sex, it was an expression of love. Amazing. The tears have poured forth, just as a way to get out all that emotion you made me feel. Such a beautiful story. Thank you x
PS I loved you "A day in the Life" as well, and just knew I had to read this one. I will read "concealed Passion" at some time, but I feel I will have to get over the emotions of this one first!
Excellent! I love how you brought to my attention the attitude we can convey in fear if we let fear rule our lives. Like the step-mother,if she really understood she would look for the love the kids needed not judgmental-ism.Alex wouldn't have wasted precious time and emotions trying to please the ignorant few. Thanks keep up the good work
I had actually read this some time ago, have been going through my Favs' favorites looking for good stories and re-discovered this.
Remembered it, but had been a while so didn't remember details, was nice to re-read.
great storytelling! I am amazed at how good the stories are on this portal and many of them have a very unexpected emotional impact. Well done and keep on writing
Taking all three chapters together, one great story. But Chapter 3 really kicked the hell out of the emotions. It had the lot: love, heartache, spite (the vicious stepmother), and enough drama to choke a horse. I'm a straight man in my seventies and you almost had me in tears towards the end. Brilliant stuff, Cat---keep up the good work.
Your writing is exquisite....your stories are remarkable. I have read this one so often I can almost quote each line. I hope you are simply taking time away in order to develop more story lines and characters like Alex and Kate.
I loved all three chapters. All filled with love and romance. This one was sad (and lovely as well). Made me cry several times. Thank you for writing this wonderful story of Kate and Alex.
and that is really true they can happen for a reason, good series just wish there were more parts to it
Just recently found this story which is among the best I have read and wondering why we haven't seen more of your work?
Coldcat will you write more about these two lovers Aex and Kate and let us know if they marry and have any more children I have read all 3 stories a few times I find something different every time I read that I missed the last time fantastic stories cannot wait for more stories thank you. xxxxx
ColdCat this is up with the best stories on Literotica. Beautifully written and it makes your reader get so "into" the characters. So glad they had a happy ending. Thank you
Wow a punch in gut when things grew so dark and tragic but it was so captivating I loved this story. A good story is one you can feel in your pulse or core so this one was wonderful.
What a Wonderful series of stories. Which pulled at my heartstrings. Deserves much more than 5*s.
It was a pleasure to find an old series of this quality that I hadn't read before.
I can't believe this little series is 13 years old now & I've only just discovered it. What a little gem and it's so close to real life, I love it & feel like I experienced so many emotions reading through the story.
I wish I could rate it more than 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐