All Comments on 'Acolyte'

Interesting premise and I'm enjoying the storytelling. I assume this is part 1?

It's probably a Part 1. I find the magic more interesting than the sex. Avoiding names has a weird effect on the atmosphere, though. I may need to ditch that.

You also she described their bodies in more detail to help paint a better picture.

Ah, yes, one of my common failings...

Good start and I certainly would enjoy reading more of the reluctant witch and her new found spells. I think your handling and description of the sex was good, enough to let us know what was going on but not bogged down in the minutia of the act. If the story is good enough, it doesn't need all the cut and paste sex that some stories have. Tends to get old after the first dozen or so times it happens and it's always the same. Thanks and looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm working on another, but slowly. But, for now, thank you for all the comments. Now, where did I put the scissors and glue...

I usually don’t read fantasy, but your writing and storytelling drew me in. Well done and I await part 2.

I really enjoy your writing. Please continue!