All Comments on 'Across Enemy Lines Ch. 01'

<3 it!!!! More please. :)

A nice start, could become a very interesting story.

Interesting, hot, and sexy. Looking forward to more. I love smart women and strong men!

an interesting beginning. especially as it sounds well thought out, hot sex and the language is free flowing.

nice!

lovely stories, would love to read more

Good pace. I'll look out for the next chapter.

I love it already. Great start, interesting characters, and of course, the sex is good. ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter,

LilyA

Great opener and I can't wait to read more! Love the whole "scorned lovers" reunited angle and the business intrigure is an added bonus.

i have been scanning the site each day for the next chapter. dnt keep us all waiting for so long.

please update soon!!! It's so interesting so far and Im excited of the direction you are taking us.

Sucks when you get through three chapters only to find out it’s an unfinished story from nearly 10 years ago!