All Comments on 'Across the Ages 01: 1979 Peggy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The story itself is pretty mundane, but....

....I love your descriptive writing, as in this paragraph: "For the next few hours the tide of the party surged from living room to pool to kitchen and back to living room, whirls of conversation spinning up and dying down, the flotsam and jetsam of empty bottles and food scraps accumulating at the margins."

Making it a solid 4.

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I enjoy writing about that moment of affection when two people realize that their desire is reciprocated and they trust each other enough to make the leap.

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