All Comments on 'Actual Sorority Sisters Pt. 02'

Love this story. Can't wait for part 3. Don't delay please.

You are a very talented author. I have been around Lit almost since it inception and you are right up there as one of the very best and have set a high bar to maintain this reputation.

Thank you very much for this contribution.

SliperyRox

Let me first say that if there was anything amiss I did not see it, nor would I care because this is a very interesting story. I guess we are all waiting for the big moment when the sisters unite and I am guessing that it will start out rough but end up emotionally good. I do hope that the level of "resistance" in the minds of the pledges will ease as if seems that such inhibition on their part is rapidly diminishing and if not then we should see some dropping from the pledge class. I find your writing exceptionally good and the story as well. I am as excited to see the following pieces as you probably were to write them. I offer no advice no desire other then to read what is to cum!

I really enjoy your writing. I find it just a little,(and I mean slightly), long, but that is a price I am very glad to pay for good writing. I detest the "stories" on this, and other sites, where there is no development, only straight sex from the first words. My favorite authors on here are Laurie and CB Summers, (known as Chica and the Man), and her friend PaulC. They have excellent characters written with great storytelling, and they even sometimes share characters. It helps they write in my favorite sub-genre: Lesbian incest. Now, after a few years search, I can finally add another to that list. Keep up the good work, and don't get too burnt out as they did and stop writing. Looking forward to the rest of this story, and many others.

Really hoping that Ellie/Lizzie and Lilly are able (during the senior/pledge night) to air out their anger/resentment/miscommunications they each have.

Eagerly anticipating Lori and Ellie/Lizzie's movie and the rest of the story. Keep up the good work.

Perhaps a good editor. I understand trying to develop characters but you lost that in the verbiage. I won't be reading anymore. A waste of time.

don't worry about "anonymous"'s comments. I have read a number of different authors' works and "he" is always there bashing. Great story. Having been greek in college it can only make me think back and wonder.

Get some, It's going along good. I Like.

the story is incredibly erotic and I find the inter-action between the sorority sisters more exciting then the possible sex between the sisters.

Tomorrow? Pretty please!

Already one of my favorite stories.

Keep up the excellent work!

Love the story but be careful " she wore a black bra and matchi.g panties" "when I removed her shorts she wasn't wearing panties" still great job

Never commented on a story, but this is exquisite. The build up. The little teases of what's to come. Outstanding. Please continue writing more after this series!

Wow. After cunnilingus,analingus and, veggie insertions I am wondering what the pledges can do with their films to keep the upper classmen from getting bored. I have some of my own ideas but will patiently wait for your next installment.

This is the first time I've ever commented, but I love this series! Please release the rest soon, I'm on pins and needles!

Seriously, where's the next installment? If it's already been written, why does it take so long to post? As you said, this is quite an investment. It's starting to feel like a waste, especially for someone that doesn't usually read a story if it's more than 3 pages long. Please post soon.

Being a huge fan of the lesbian stories here on literotica. This is an awesome read!

Thank you for taking your time making it and for publishing it here.

Because you yourself pointed out that it would have some errors, I will leave it at that. :)

Looking forward to the next part!

Love it so far cant wait for next update.

Love the story keep it going

Amazing story, anxiously awaiting the next part(s)!

It's like watching a bunch of braindead retards share the same brain--OH noes, I don't want to get thrown out of the sorority, guess I better do as they say! Tee hee! This isn't wrong at all! Gosh, I never knew I was secretly a lesbian, or brainless submissive! I'm repulsed by this, but I'll show my sister! Grrr!

And little girls like Justin Beiber, so I guess I shouldn't be surprised people like this tripe.

For someone that doesn't really enjoy lesbian stories, this has got me hard (in so many ways... :-)

Halfway through and looking forward to the rest.

Please upload part 3 I'm very intrigued with lily and Lizzie.

I enjoy a good story one where you keep reading but too soon it ends. I have read many a good story/series that has a long beginning 6-8 pages or more. Unfortunitely many times the following parts of the story were/are signifigantly shorter thus making the first chapter the most enjoyable.

I say WELL DONE this is just as long and as enticingly enjoyable a read as part one. I am jumping to part 3 as I speak.

Glad I came across Sorority Sisters, rayanmc12@gmail.com

Chapter two has surpassed chapter one on the creative front. Another enjoyable read that reals the reader in enticing them to crave more. Still a very well and intriguing told story.

Extremly hot, I love it. I love your style, I love how you explain their feelings, thier doubts, their enthusiasm. I love every girl joining this sorority. Oh, how much I want to eat pussy of each of them.

Thank you so much this is a great story & well worth reading. Can’t wait to read more 💋

Great continuation of the story, can't wait to read more

I found the second chapter flowed easily from the first. A lot more character development and sex. I’m enjoying it!

Warning this is a Lesbo story............. gross...........

I love amateur lesbian movies. I can't wait....