by PlayfulLittle1
I absolutely loved the idea of being blindfolded AND headphoned. The style of music just sends me over the edge with sensory overload. Beautifully written, I would read this over and over again.
The idea of sensory deprivation done to music was amazing, also the fact that the very pace of the scene follows the intonations was brilliant. How you write is very descriptive, it captures the readers imagination, filling in details, leaving just enough for our (the readers minds) to fill in the blanks. I actually groaned out loud when the individual realises there are two young women enjoying his body. You write very well and crisply. I cannot wait to read more of your work.
I like the way you invite the reader into the story.
Descriptions enticingly written for the reduced senses.
Very nicely done.
To listen to the version of the titular song I had in mind as i was writing, you can find it on YouTube by searching "adagio for strings samuel barber choral robert shaw". It should be the first selection. (Image is a blue CD cover with the word "Spirit".) I hope you enjoy!
...hear that music, playing in my ears.
beautiful and sexy, just like the author ;)