All Comments on 'Adam's Gardening Service Ch. 03'

by Elektracal

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

5 stars! Great sex and great story-telling. Adam's emotional wavering, Ava's pleasure in "the little details" -- I hope to see your next chapter soon.

And ... it would be great to have Ava take Adam's cock up her ass. Just sayin'.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

At last! Chapter 3 of this excellent story is here, and the author doesn't disappoint, with a riveting drama highlighted by the rivalry between Ava and Melanie. How this will pan out is a question that the author leaves unanswered in this chapter, and this leaves the reader pining for the next one, to find out what will happen next. However, this chapter will make little sense, and cannot be properly appreciated, unless the story is read from Chapter 1. Five stars.

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