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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting. Not usually the kind of story that I would get into. But this was very well written and I really enjoyed it. Thanks!

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Wish I had a sister, and she was as horny as me…like you and your brother….

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Wow. Vivid. 5star.

Deserves to be rated well higher than it is, like 4.5/6 at least.

The only literary critique I'd offer is that the phrase "my brother" and the like with every line became repetitive enough to notice. But maybe that was deliberate style. It didn't really detract.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Awesome

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