All Comments on 'Adele's Halloween Treat'

..example of the stupidity of the second person narrative. You tell me what happened to me, what I said, what I did, who said what to me, and so on, as though I am a moron and don't know all this. Why do people insist on this 2nd person format? It makes no sense whatever. It would be just as easy to write in the 3rd person.

The story as a story has merit, so I will not score it at zero, but the format is ludicrous.

Freddy

Great story!! You must continue it with another chapter!!! Keep up the great work... :-)

this was kinda dumb...waste of my times really.zzz

Hot, I recall back in HS this asian girl who was so hot and she was really into girls. My GF at the time told me she was at a party and watched her go down on all the cheerleaders.