All Comments on 'Aditi's Swee(a)t Life Pt. 01'

by pujalata980

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Oh God! What a seductive story. The slow-burn was brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The way the introduction was written would make anybody wet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Aditi has a slut in herself and will prove it in the later parts for sure

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The fiery paced seduction was great. I loved how the author explained Aditi's state of mind

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brilliantly executed introduction of the story. Really hot. Looking forward to the next parts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A revolutionary start to a hot story. Can't applaud the author enough.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The story made me remember My Maid Lata, the build-up was great, so is this story. Slowly and steadily the author had brought the protagonists together. I think Tara will have a major part to play too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Right from the start the story has bound me to it. The slow-burn was great. Looking forward to more encounters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Aditi has a soft corner for Tara as well, we might see a double affair in future

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Irresistible start to the story. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Involve Tara and Kamla into a threesome with Aditi

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Use the well structured build up to construct a really hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am privileged to read such a hot beginning. Hope the next part will be hotter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Update the next part soon. Involve Tara in it more.

PriyalesboPriyalesbo10 months ago

I love the way how kamla treat with aditi

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It was awesome really

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I guess you are taking a break from writing but I would absolutely love to read more from you

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