All Comments on 'Adopting a New Outlook'

Sweet

Such a great story. Only problem is waiting for next chapter.

Loved it, what a build up though. More please. Hope these 3 are going to get even more involved with each other. NO outsiders please.

That was really good. I wonder what the parents are going to say. Then you for the fun read.

What a doozy! A really difficult read. So much meandering through the nuances and scatter-brain emotions slash actions.

Still, worth the read, thank You.

Wow! We need more of this story! This is some of the best that I have seen.

Absolutely hope you write more! Would love to see what happens with Danni and Jess as well as if Jess ever decides to have full sex with Aaron. Would also be interested to see if both girls got to read all of his works to fully understand everything in his head.

Nice story, but the last chapter needs editing so it flows better.

A continuation would be nice. So would getting a proofreader...

There was a lot of depth to this story, and I appreciated the way it built up. I think a bit of gentle editing would improve the flow, but you've got the talent to give your characters inner life and that's 95% of the battle.

Truly fantastic story. Well written and detailed. Maybe not an erotic story as much as a love story, but still absolutely loved it. I also hope there is a sequel to this story.

A well written, beautiful story.

Five stars. It wasn't always abundantly clear who was talking. Just a bit of cleanup of the dialog, some editing to fix missing words and typos, and this will be one of the better stories on Literotica.

More on how all three love grows for each other, it's the only way it really can go.

Another truly fine story. As has been suggested by others, this story deserves a careful edit and proofreading to polish it to its deserved potential. Further stories of these three would be wonderful.

great story. don't stop!! Loved it, 6 stars. I want to see where this goes.

Thank you!

Sir, may I have more please?