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- Adriano's Creation
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Click hereThis is my entry for the 2010 Halloween Erotic Story Contest. I had so much fun with the vocal and sound effects! Please vote for me (by clicking on the appropriate number of stars) and leave a comment. I love those!
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agoI love your voice. You sound very sensual from the beginning and even moreso during the hypnotic foreplay. Your orgasms sound real and I had to replay your vocals to get to the second uh...uh...uh or gaz ummmmmm. Ohh! Your creations are so much more than sex - you're my favorite vocalist. I may not be your biggest fan but I am one of your biggest groupies. I will continue to follow you.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI thought it was a mistake. 2010??? Then I realized what you did. I did need the primer for the newer story. A brilliant piece. I might have done the hypnotic part differently: I would have used your reverberated voice, expressing Adriano's mesmerism, as a mantra, while your waking voice spoke your discontent and uncertainties. Like as if you would do it all over again? heh Just trying to give a creative suggestion for any future work.
Anonymousover 11 years agoLove your stories. Very real I'm almost there.
how about a cougar seducing her sons friend.
Kat
katmanduaz@aol.com
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI've read/heard a lot of stories on here, but I HAD to give my adulation for this one. We need more fully fleshed-out productions like this. I'm still recovering from the utter stupid that is Twilight, and listening to a story like this that actually has some HORROR aspects to it is really helping. Thank you, and I can't wait to hear more. ;)
sengir_assassinabout 13 years agoHoly crap! That was one of the best stories I ever heard!
PurpleMasterover 13 years agoFive stars is truly worthy of the excellent presentation! You guys did a great job with both the story and special effects! It helped me through a lonely night while the wife is away! ;) I am looking for more in the future!
theravenfoxover 13 years agoAuthorThank you all for your feedback! I hope that the story intrigues you enough that you're intested in the entire series, which I'm beginning work on now. I think it's going to be really hot AND unique. Thank you for your votes, comments and feedback messages.
@Anons who said too many effects and too much echo. I am experimenting and hope to get things just right. I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy this submission. I will gladly listen to any helpful suggestions you may have. Thank you for your feedback.
Anonymousover 13 years agoravenfox - i love your submissions but this one just did not work for me. Looking forward to your next one
BigZack69over 13 years agoAnother hit. I am a fan of Non-consent. Your voice and intonation is great, exquisite and delicious. The added editing and music sound very professional. More MORE M O R E ! ! !
Anonymousover 13 years agoi've always loved ur voice & stories.. but i guess this time u have gone a bit far on the effects
