by oneminute2
Too much for me, but if it's what gets you off, then have at it. I won't give a rating as this off the beaten path and I don't simply give terrible remarks or ratings over stuff I'm not into. Keep writing.
Too far out of my realm to legitimately make positive comments . . . Or rate.
I would love for me to be the dad fucking my sons with thier Uncle. And gramps
Comes across as a thrown together gif reel. Much to much and way to fast. I've never read an incest story was more interested with the interracial aspect of it. Didn't really come across that way at all. Consider revising your storytelling. It started out good and then went warp speed Sybil. I would give it a second read if revised and updated. So not my cup of tea but it would be worth a reread just to compare it with the revision.