All Comments on 'Adult Theater Second Visit'

by PegasusRyder

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Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 1 year ago

So true I liked the story. I went to parties where I had Sex with several the Mens at a time. Once I got with one Man or a boyfriend or Man I was just there with got started and he CUM IN me then like the Other Mens would want there turn or just join in front of me or getting IN me from behind me while another Man took his place at my Mouth. I guess I was drunk with being with the Mens and just wanting to Fuck. A Man even told me I was drunk for that Black dick once and I was. So yeah I can see things like this do happen and I was glad I read it and it reminded me of some the times and things I done.

DeeannamontanaDeeannamontanaover 1 year ago

Another hot installment!

Fantasy stuff and I like the way you developed and carried the story.

A little heavy on the racial slurs, even with the warning...not a show stopper, though.

The story is good...Yummy to fantasize about this!

PegasusRyderPegasusRyderover 1 year agoAuthor

Deeannamontana - I do apologize for the racial slurs, and had it not been a true story I would not have used the language I used. But since it is a true story I kept it as truthful as possible. Thank you for the kind comment.

gtmm49684gtmm496848 months ago

I substituted the word "black" for every place you used "n....." when I read this story. It actually reads better my way than yours no matter how you try to justify it. Using a racial slur, the most ignorant one you could have chosen btw, does not make the story any more truthful or true than if not being offensive. C'mon, you ruined what could have been a hot story. JMHO thanks for sharing your experiences though

PegasusRyderPegasusRyder5 months agoAuthor

gtmm49684 - I respect your opinion. In the story, as it was told to me, she said she was actually asked to use the n-word. The n-word is not meant to be offensive, the n-word wasn’t used out of ignorance. The use of the n-word was requested by the Black man to degrade and show submission of a white woman, acknowledging the Black man is superior.

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