All Comments on 'Adulterous Love, Francesca'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The first half seemed quite romantic until the reveal of his status. After that, I felt sorry for her and how he was using her. Yes, it feels real, but really sad, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent. Although it appears to be a relationship without future, it contains elements of romanticism. Do write more about Francesca and her much older lover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Cheating asshole. Pretty much ends any chance of it being erotic.

HotswimmerHotswimmeralmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for all your comments (favourable or not) I appreciate the suggestions

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'd like to read more pls

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