by AbbyHaynes
He drove you to his cabin, yet you drove yourself home? In what? Wouldn't the boyfriend notice a strange car? A big credibility gap in an otherwise ok story.
The part about driving home is confusing as stated by the other poster. I think this story could have been expanded, or should be into a longer version as it is a bit of a flash story as written.
You are completely right!! I changed how I got there in one of my last edits and forgot to fix how I got home! Submitting an edit now. As to being part of a longer story, I am just experimenting with sharing some of my most memorable experiences, some characters repeat and some are only in one story :)