All Comments on 'Adultery in Alaska'

by AbbyHaynes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You stole his truck?

He drove you to his cabin, yet you drove yourself home? In what? Wouldn't the boyfriend notice a strange car? A big credibility gap in an otherwise ok story.

Sidney43Sidney43over 8 years ago

The part about driving home is confusing as stated by the other poster. I think this story could have been expanded, or should be into a longer version as it is a bit of a flash story as written.

AbbyHaynesAbbyHaynesover 8 years agoAuthor
how embarassing!

You are completely right!! I changed how I got there in one of my last edits and forgot to fix how I got home! Submitting an edit now. As to being part of a longer story, I am just experimenting with sharing some of my most memorable experiences, some characters repeat and some are only in one story :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Talented

One of the best stories on this site!

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