All Comments on 'Adventure in the Office'

was shorter than your ex-husband's new marriage. He deserved better than you.

Ahhh yes, nothing hotter than a wife who has literally no respect or love for her husband. The least cheating spouses could do is be kind enough to give their spouse a divorce so they can find someone who is less than worthless to be married to.

all these months? Will he ever find out? Does she think it's the same to have a threesome with her husband and cheat behind his back? That what he doesn't know will not hurt him? This is pure shit.

Hot but a bit rushed towards the end I think. For a first effort OK for me.

Stories about morons are NOT interesting.

Look at our profile, it states we are not writers. We will relate our experiences as best as we can. Anonymous comments are like farts in the wind, they drift away. Constructive help is welcomed otherwise, scroll on by.

Your grammar, punctuation,etc was good. constructive feedback : more. More detail, more buildup, more tension and more of the juicy bits of sex.

At.least you are aware of that bit of truth. So then, why are you trying to post a story?

Sorry, this wasn't a story. It seemed more like a PowerPoint presentation without the bullets. Very weak effort

A very sensible approach to cheating. Credit due for wading into the shark infested waters of LW and having a go! Write more please. It’s obvious you can take the abuse