All Comments on 'Adventure with Anna Pt. 01'

Perfect story, cant wait for next part. Love the dynamic between them. But maybee more details about them would be good. I imagine she is older then him. It somehow work for me that way.

Not much.

Good start. I'm curious about what they look like. I picture the guy being in college, swimmer's build and tall, maybe 6'2" or so. And Anna is older, maybe late 30's or early 40's, slender with long brown hair. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

"She is older THEN him? It's "THAN". And some snooty grammarians would say "than he", I wouldn't though. The kinky stuff, anal, doesn't do it for me. But if it works for you, go for it.

..when it's basically just a glorified set up for anal masturbation.

When I read the tag line "Anna takes me out nude" I was expecting some outdoor nudity. But no, he has a blanket covering and all the action is indoors.

Disappointing and tiresome.

I'm confused. Why is this chapter 1 and your only story when it seems like a chapter 2 or sequel to another story?