All Comments on 'Adventures in Unknown Space Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Splendid starting.

Splendid Start.

scarf7cescarf7cealmost 4 years ago
Nice start

Great story, love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
AHHH

Was hoping the AI could be transferred to his ship

maddictmaddictalmost 4 years ago

I'm your Captain, yah,yah,yah,yah,yah.

Her body moving in fascinating ways as she whipped the batter.

I'm lightly stealing this from another si,fi, what if Natalie was powered by the Captains cum, and your say there are at least two more

Crusader235Crusader235almost 4 years ago
Yes!

Let the adventure continue! Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue.

More please.

SirCarlSirCarlalmost 4 years ago
Good, very good so far..

You have the makings of a "tale" that could go on, and in, several directions. Please do so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Like it so much

This is always what I wanted being an explorer and find something to ....

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 3 years ago
"I think we'd better go find them."

I think so too. Porn-logic demands it. It's science.

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