by girlhoney
this started out to be a very good story, however when I got to the last page I kind of just skimmed over it, I was just glad it was only the last page
In every way your writing has improved out of sight!
More please!
Veronica (portia98)
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Intensely erotic !
This was so very hot...especially when Sarah and Jane undressed....then became physical!
And, I hope things work out for Pam.....she is delightfully sexy!
Keep writing....getting better.....
I agree with portia98 - your writing is getting better and better.
Thank you for a delicious read!
Ginaxxxxx