All Comments on 'Adventures of a Sales Executive Ch. 03'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 4 years ago
pretty good

this started out to be a very good story, however when I got to the last page I kind of just skimmed over it, I was just glad it was only the last page

Abigail1122Abigail1122over 4 years ago
Curious

Was there a real Sarah? (and Linda?)

Wow

portia98portia98about 4 years ago
Wow!

In every way your writing has improved out of sight!

More please!

Veronica (portia98)

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paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdalmost 4 years ago
Oh wow!

Intensely erotic !

This was so very hot...especially when Sarah and Jane undressed....then became physical!

And, I hope things work out for Pam.....she is delightfully sexy!

Keep writing....getting better.....

auburnginaauburnginaalmost 4 years ago
Lovely!!!!!

I agree with portia98 - your writing is getting better and better.

Thank you for a delicious read!

Ginaxxxxx

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Hi tall and toned, I am interested in trying to write erotic stories, and maybe making some new friends. Guys, I am now bisexual and want to broaden my sexual horizons, so the only things I will rule out are water sports, toilet, and animals. I am 5 9 tall 34b, 24,36, very l...