by girlhoney
Loved reading all four chapters and thoroughly enjoyed each one. Hope to see more in the near future and hope all the relationships develop. Would love to see what happens to Pam and that she doesn’t drop off the series
not bad, but you should have had the bartender on the first page she sounded like she was very good
Re-reading from Ch 01, I am amazed at how you have developed ion your writing. I love the older-younger theme you have introduced into this delicious saga.
You have built up a great cast of characters. A get-together of all of them would be mind-blowing!
Love
Veronica (portia98)
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Love reading about Jane and her lovers...she is a walking bundle of sexuality!
And she finds wonderful lusty partners, bringing out their intense libidos!
More! More!