All Comments on 'Adventures of a Space Explorer Ep. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hahaha

Fantastic piece of fiction:)

Keep writing..Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Voll Krass!!

Du schreibst sehr gut!

Ausgezeichenent.

es ist so wissentlich und herzlich schreibe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great start.

Pretty good story, a little short but not bad. May I suggest making the larger paragraphs smaller to make it a bit easier to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very good

That story was one of the best. Lots of attention to detail, loved it. Keep writing about Dr. Sara Jayne's adventure discovering life. I'll be a big fan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Story Development

For as short of a story as it was I greatly enjoyed the flow, I do wish however that this were written as a novel, I would love to see the characters more, pardon the pun, fleshed out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
awesome

that was interesting n hot xD but there should be a continuation to this :) thank u for writing something good :)

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