by EurasianRhapsody
Awsome start. Just exciting and intriging enough to keep me cumming back.
good story,
I didn't pick up on the fact jamie was a girl till the part where the cup size of her breast was discussed.
I liked the setting, look forward to where this may go. :-)
My goodness, don't you possess the gift of the written word. You spin emotions, memory and actions into an erotic blur, despite the most harsh setting and hopeless situation one could imagine. Please keep writing, this story deserves the full length treatment
love hearing from you guys, especially since you all liked it so far! i always enjoy writing these stories because they tturn me on like quite nothing else can! definitely more sexy action in chapter 2, coming soon... =}