by Tatonka
Two cheaters....they had the chance to be honest and have an open marriage, instead they both opted to cheat on their spouses, they planned it then executed the cheating. Don't much like cheaters, but at least they deserve each other and both deserve to be cheated on by their "loving spouse"....with spouses like that who needs enemies.
Why do people who clearly don't like this type of story read part 7? when they knew by part 1 or 2 that the story wasn't for them. Keep up the good stuff Tatonka.
Thank you for the comments, I'm happy that there are people that understand that this is an erotic story that is total fiction and can appreciate it for what it is. To the retards that insist on leaving negative comments all I can say is why are you reading it. Not only that why are you even on this web site? When you read my storys and you're done jacking off you feel so guilty that you have to make a negative comment? I guess your wife must have fucked all of your friends and now you're in jack off limbo.
I have to be honest. I liked the story until I read about Tim's episode. The fact that he coerced his assistant is damaging to his character. Now I feel he is an asshole and I want him to lose his job and his marriage. He became the bad guy. If a story were written from his assistant's husbands point of view we would all be wanting revenge against this asshole. He clearly has no respect for marriage. Tim and Tami should seek some serious counseling.
I came across you in a category search and have been surprised by the low as hell scoring. I have not read other people's feedback but they must be haters.
These protracted development pieces do not work for everyone. Immediate gratification is highly over rated as it rarely occurs in real life.
I hope more people who enjoy finding out about the characters through interactions in a story come to read you.
Solid 5 Star stuff.