All Comments on 'Adventures on Public Transit'

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GybbsGybbsabout 2 years ago

Gotta move back to the city!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

HOT story, but I don't see what's unusual about it, a lot of people make their lunch before going into work. I lived near the subway and always took it into Wash DC rather than fight traffic. Had heard stories like this, but never saw anything or had anything happen to me. But I always went commando just in case. Fun story, thanks. MLF

jonkingbrothersjonkingbrothersabout 2 years ago

Every time I ride a subway, I look around at the other passengers and wonder which of them (under the right circumstances) would be willing to play with other men there in that train car. So far, no luck in either being part of an encounter like this, or in seeing others engaged in one - but as you said, good things can cum to those who wait! Love the idea you have here.

SrBankerSrBankerabout 2 years ago

I liked the development of this story; almost parallels a real live event that happened to me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lucky you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Oh come on, in broad daylight on a crowded train? So unbelievable it's silly. Dumb ass story.

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Male, 60+, writer of erotica. To bring the reader in to a story, make them see what you see, make them feel what you feel, so they can visualize what is happening inside their head, like watching a film or play. In writing, that's what I aspire to do. I have been writing ero...