All Comments on 'Adventures with My Daughter Pt. 01'

Absolutely loved its gentle pace. Looking forward to more. Thank you

Love the languid, relaxed build up of anticipation, Well written, Kisandra. 5 stars

All mothers and daughters should experience such beautiful uninhibited love. Such love flows throughout the story.

Short and sweet with sensuality from start to finish.

Alwaystaboo

I thought the writing was a perfect container for the thoughts and the emotions between a mother and daughter. There is always the thought from some that outright sex is demanded between them to make it "hot". Believe me, this is a slow burner but the contents are very hot and I for one will look forward to their slow inevitable truths. I enjoyed it very much.

Bravo. Well done. Soft and gentle. Such a wonderful loving pace. Can't wait for more. Far too few mother daughter stories on lot. Please continue soon

Liked the languid pace (as daddy1950 described it). In my view, subtlety is much more erotic than bombast. I think you're on the right track. Will look forward to your follow-up.

That was a fantastic start. Do not stop now. Erica needs to go to her daughter's room and explain the facts of life to Summer. Then take Summer in her arms and make love to her just like women know what a women needs.

Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I am uploading ch. 02 as I type. Well, not literally of course. The blend of love and lust is a difficult one to convey without having one emotion overpowering and sometimes undermining the other.

Agreed with the others about a nice slow start, with a promise to further expand and explore their relationship.

Thanks for anyone that has communicated with me via email. I hope I have replied to everyone, but I have had to change my email address. So feel free to send again or pm me. x k

It's nice and sweet. :)

Like it a lot so far, can't wait for more! The slow start is good. Seduction should build gradually.

Gentle & erotic. Really exciting.

Loved it snd also enjoyed the other chapters.

This is so hot every time I read it I rub cream into my nipples and touch my wet pussy until I cum