by kisandra
You've continued the high standard of writing. Pleased with the gentle increase of sexual love making, instead of a headlong rush into full one on one sex. Highly erotic and worthy of another five points. Looking forward to more.
Everything that daddy1950 said and more. I prefer stories that are 3ish pages not long drawn out novels. And now I find myself wanting more when o get to the end of each chapter. Incredibly erotic. Just long enough to make my body beg for more(yes I find myself touching my very wet sex with every chapter. And know I am left to wonder what will happen next. Of course I am alone this morning. Darn it !!!
Thank you so much.
Clearly ch.03 will move on the sexual side a little more. Quite a bit more.
Then I'd like to get Summer interested in her mom's "other" life. Meet her friends; but I would like to be guided by your feedback.