All Comments on 'Affair Turns into Complete Control'

Hot. Good story.

Needs a little text editing.

Is this a true story that happened to you? Tell me.

I, like a lot of readers love when authors tell true stories. It suddenly goes from a story to living the experience with you.

It takes a lot to put yourself out their, and we appreciate it.

Thanks for sharing your true story!

Really enjoyed your story... Nice and hot and you have nicely developed the relationship between you and Steve for your readers. Well done, hope you write more soon...

Loved to read about this hot slutty sex that you had with Steve and Ryan - I’m sure Ryan thought his birthdays and Christmas’s all “came” at once as he was thrusting in and out of your tight wet pussy.

One of the better reads that I've seen in this site. It's obviously real experience rather than fiction and I'd like to see more.

First of all, a dam is a structure that holds water. I believe 'damn' is the word you wanted.

Secondly while the story is pretty fucking hot, I wish you would have added more details to the actual sex.

But with that said, I enjoyed hearing about you finding your inner slut! ;->

True stories are a\so fucking HOOOTTTT!

Another nicely done story by April. I love the true ones. 5 stars. Thank you.

Very erotic and sexy story April.

Thank you for all the nice comments.

Interesting premise.

Could have used some more foreplay. Particularly with Ryan.

Sex was too truncated/short.

And BOY, do you need an editor/proofreader.

Four stars.

I like your true stories, and really like your writing style!! You're good April601. I'm going to your author's log for more

If your story is hot, go for it. Put pen to paper!

Complaining about the odd spelling mistake or grammar glitch is like saying you will only have sex with a flawless supermodel. Real women are much more fun!

This is an entertaining story. I began writing true stories also, then moved into writing other peoples trues stories, mixed with some truth based fiction. I've always believed in the whole "truth is stranger (sexier) than fiction logic. Keep writing, it keeps getting better the more you write...

MMMMMM what a sexy hot story..... I look forward to reading all your stories and the thought of knowing they are true is hot !!! Love your attention to clothes detail description... :)

more of her being ready for sex adventure a her husband is away

What a fucking pathetic cum dumpster. Blech.