All Comments on 'After'

That was good. Twists and all

5stars

Interesting story. Different!

5

Good story. Original or at least I haven't read anything like it.

Good one

I don't see why. Kissing a girl moaning through a ball gag is hot.

Nice. D

Great twist on the "friendly neighborhood bartender!"

Something different. Thanks

This had a surprise or two and was good, though brief read. 4 stars

Good one! Nice little bit of mystery there to make it interesting. Traject that his marriage got blown up by a lie. He's lucky he didn't run into any of the husbands he "helped out" by educating their wives while he fucked them.

What a ride! Loved the intertwined plot lines that kept us guessing until toward the end. There was dialogue on the second encounter with Tracy that had me thinking the husband wasn’t around, but still well played. I would have liked a more detailed epilogue, but well done story. 4.6*

Nicely done. Made me smile with this five-star gem.

Hooked

REALLY liked the mystery aspect! You took a common cheating wife trope, threw it into a less-common "revenge against cheating wives" story, then completely upended it with the mystery storyline. You left me hungry for more, and I VERY much hope that you'll pursue the mystery genre further in the future. Five stars!

Nice plot 5 Stars D

Very nicely done. My only real issue with it was the time issue with confronting his wife's lover. After two years, that seemed a bit weird for him to just show up and the guy let him in, needed to be expanded a bit. Also, the wife thought he had an affair, and didn't discuss it with any of her friends or her mother. Perhaps the bartender wasn't just a friend, but her best friend, and the only one she confided in?

Very good. No idea why Connie did what she did. I hope that Karma isn't finished with making her life miserable.

Sad but well written

5 stars

Worth reading. Who did the bar maid say that he was having an affair with?

A great read. A sad, interesting tale, a creative idea, very well written. Direct and to the point, economically presented, with just the right amount of backstory to fill in the blanks. A truly adult story with realistic adult dialog and behavior. Bravo!

Now here is a writer who knows how to write. This story has a very creative concept, and is quite original. The conversations are realistic and feel/sound like genuine adults talking. The emotions are real, not melodramatic, with no trace of Hallmark sentimentality. A great tale!

Just stupid

Nope all arseholes that fuck married women deserve all they get.

The story was rolling along and just sort of ended. Still enjoyed most of it.

Why hiding the tags ?

felt it could have been better. I mean having Tracy go all " yes sir" and submissive was a waste. He really didn't cover his wife revenge sex that much. So what if she was lied to? Why didn't he get angry over her not confronting him? She goes straight to revenge sex! Sad that she died, yes, but my anger would be over never confronting her to divorce her cheating ass! Then this new woman lies about her husband so she can be his sex slut and never worry about getting an STD from the man whore?

Interestingly creative. Good execution. Rushed ending. 5

Good story well written. Thank you.

Nice

Kind of sad. It's crazy that the MC's wife would blow up her marriage without some kind of proof or confronting her husband. They could had tracked down lie together.

I liked the ending. The start of the story, not so much.

You did a decent job of trying to make his behavior believable, but mostly failed. A man shattered by an unfaithful wife isn't going to fuck a married woman once and think it's okay, but then go berserk if she comes back for a second helping. Maybe if he gave her a warning the first time she hit on him and then banged her like a slut if she came back to try again. Maybe. Either way, I don't see him hiding her cheating from her husband. It just doesn't fit with what he went through as he's very broken up over not knowing it was happening and then not being able to ask her why when he found out.

Not bad. But why do almost all of these stories take place either in a bar/pub and rely heavily on drinking? Not everyone drinks and the same thing happens to them. 3*

This was kind of weird but entertaining nonetheless.

Like 90% of the story never made it onto paper. I like the storyline, but it needed more substance and more context. The characters needed to be a bit more subtle. Not every painting needs broad strokes, and this is one.

Cute story

An interesting story of how a scheming bitch fucked everything up, but especially for herself. 5*.

Your stuff is getting better with each submission. Good work.

1. Original

2. Well written

3. I actually like the characters, often don't

I liked that. With revenge out of reach, he searched for answers.

Cute story enjoyed the read. Thanks for your writing.

Very enjoyable story, the beginning was packed with emotion. Nice twist with Tracy, actually pursuing Rick. Would have liked little more of an ending……

Thanks for writing.

Great story

Nice work, thank you

Dad gum, that had more twists and turns than mountain road. I started out really disliking this guy, worked through to understanding his pain a little. He was taking revenge on women like his supposed cheating wife. I’m happy he got the straight story and busted Connie. A pretty solid story.

That was different. A good read

A little different, but that made it a great story.

Nice!

I don't care if I knew this perosn for 40yrs.. I don't care if Jesus himself told me my husband is cheating. I would need to see some RECEIPTS... I know my husband, I would know he wouldn't do that to me. It's not in his character. I'm not just taking someone's word for it. She had more faith in Connie than she did in her own husband 🤌🏽.. why didn't she talk to her husband about his supposed cheating?. Why go straight to a revenge fuck instead of just asking him?. Connie might've instigated this, but the dead slut wife clearly had no trust in her husband. She didn't even bother to ask him🙄 .. I think she wanted to cheat and used that as an excuse🤷🏾‍♀️.. otherwise she would've talked to him FIRST. Hell, she would've filed for divorce for his alleged cheating.. she didn't do any of that. She just took some bar slut word for it, over a man she's been with for year's with ZERO PROOF... that tells me she didn't really know her husband, didn't really trust him. And was looking for a reason to fuck someone else. There's a reason why it didn't take connie much to convince her he's cheating. I don't care that Connie was a "friend", shyt, a "friend" will lie to ruin a happy relationship faster than a stranger. Especially if they're miserable, bitter, envious, jealous and want what you have. This is why you ask for PROOF.. and even then, I'd verify the affair my damn self.

Nicely done. Thank you.

An awful tale in which the worst character was certainly the husband, a really good model for his children. Highly irrealistic, tale with really awful and unbelievable characters. Maybe next plot will be better.

Such a fantasyland story line. !

Lots of oddball characters in this story. The MC revenge cheating on a dead wife? Is that even a thing? Tracy, who is willing to be whoever she needs to be to snag Rick, and Connie, who is totally amoral in being willing to destroy a family to get what she wants, are two connivers who Rick would be well advised to stay away from. A bit of BTB is called for in Connie's case though. A divorce and a shamefaced exit from town hardly seem severe enough for what she set in motion. Still, 5 stars for a clever and well written story.

Story

Different enough to be good. Four stars.

Kept hoping one of the husbands would perform necessary surgery on him. He wasn't a good guy anymore.

No excuses he caused a lot of husbands to be either knowing or unknowingly cuckolds. No man who knowingly beds a married woman is much of a Man. USMC semper fi and do and make them die

The first time I read this it got 4 stars. The second time 5 stars. Loved it

No matter how you spin him, he's a piece of shit.