All Comments on 'After a Run'

by ShelleyN

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Enjoyed your story

Looking for more. I liked the mention of condoms. It brings more reality to the story. Keep writing looking for more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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I am a 40 looking for a good time

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A Nice Story

Spoiled by the crap about the condoms

He should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

rearden_steel_2rearden_steel_2over 5 years ago
A nice first effort

Liked your story. Spend a little more time describing your characters. Use colorful language. Then we can paint a better mental image. I liked the story though, esp. since I'm a runner too.

Happy to help you with your next effort. I have two stories here too, love to hear your opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bra

Unhooked a sports bra???

SoCaliDudeSoCaliDudeover 5 years ago
I hate condoms

I may have to take up running. But I hate condoms.

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