All Comments on 'After Hours at the Mall'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was awesome! Great story line and very believable. Would love to see this continue with

new adventures and a introduction to Emily.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

*fans myself*

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 2 years ago

5 Stars! Really well done as always. So sensual and romantic. Really enjoyed this.

GinafrommaineGinafrommaineabout 2 years ago

Nice story. I once knew a guy who was a mall security guard. Bur didn’t know him well enough to ask probing questions about any out of the world experiences.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I love it, Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story---sexy and romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well done. Sexy, erotic, and romantic.

vanmyers86vanmyers86about 2 years ago

I always enjoy your stories, and this was no exception! Well done. :)

Soccerfanpen21Soccerfanpen21almost 2 years ago

Wow, very daring of Meg, and with a stranger no less. I've only dared giving flashes from the changing rooms for a few friends. Exciting as those times were they pale to what she did, walking around the mall and the security cams everywhere.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Cute, fun story! Very enjoyable, thank you. I thought we were heading for a twist, where the girl wasn't as innocent as she seemed. Perhaps she worked at one of the stores, and had seen him one night. Or maybe she hacked into his security system and knew more than she let on.

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