After Hours Ch. 01

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After examining me for a few more moments he leaned down once more and took the lobe of my ear between his teeth, biting down softly on the tender flesh. His head moved down my face at an agonizingly slow pace, he held his mouth just above my throat, feeling his hot breath against my neck sent excited shivers down my spine. He laid several gentle kisses along my neck, stopping in the middle, where he began sucking sweetly. Despite myself, I couldn't deny how wonderful his touch felt, how much I loved his mouth on my body and I couldn't stop the gentle mewling noises that I made. After leaving his mark on my neck, Beau's attention then moved down to my breasts, he grabbed my right breast with his calloused hand as his mouth engulfed the nipple of my left. Beau suckled my left tit tenderly, every once in a while biting my nipple or rolling it with his tongue while simultaneously massaging my other breast. My face was flushed from embarrassment and shame, I was disgusted with myself over how much I was enjoying his ministrations, how much I longed for more.

"Spread your legs for me." He said passionately, I covered my face with my hands as I shook my head in defiance. With a burly chuckle Beau said "You're adorable, Stella, and as much as I'd love to play this game with you- I need to taste you." At that, Beau easily spread my legs, he then maneuvered his body over mine, kissing his way down from my breast to just above my pubic mound. He paused there for a moment, he then used both of his hands to spread my pussy lips apart, he then paused again, breathing heavily while staring at my pussy.

"Please, Beau..." I began to plead, not entirely sure what I was begging for. I wanted him to stop, I wanted him to let me go, yet another part of me longed for him to continue pleasuring me.

Without warning, Beau blew a steady stream of air directly onto my clitoris, I gasped at the feeling that it incited. I was so incredibly sensitive and it was obvious that he knew that. Spurred on by my reaction, Beau began lavishing my clitoris with long firm strokes of his tongue. I was blindsided by the sensation, it was unlike anything that I'd ever felt before. "You taste absolutely delicious, Stella." He exclaimed sensually. As I was relishing in the feeling of his tongue, he suddenly stopped, before I could even react I felt his lips close around my clitoris, and he began sucking, I couldn't help but grab his head as I was overcome with emotions and pleasure. Physically it felt undeniably incredible, yet I was in a mental battle with myself over how wrong it was to feel pleasure at a time like this. I was biting my lip to keep myself from mewling too loudly as he continued pleasuring me with his tongue, he then inserted his index finger and I moaned loudly. Slowly and at a consistent pace he pumped his finger in and out of my pussy as he continued sucking on my clitoris, after a short while he added a second finger and as soon as he did, I could no longer hold myself back and I climaxed around his fingers. I was left laying on the bed panting and overwhelmed with emotions. After a short while, I felt the bed shift slightly, I looked up to see Beau removing his own pants and underwear swiftly. When he saw me looking at him, he shone his brilliant smile once more before quickly repositioning himself between my legs. Beau grabbed his enormous length and began placing it at my opening. Seeing his rock solid cock both excited and terrified me. I estimated that it was at least nine inches long and it was unbelievably thick, I couldn't help but imagine what it would feel like inside of me- but I quickly scolded myself for the thought and a slight panic began to rise inside of me as I realized the true magnitude of what was about to happen.

"No! Beau, stop! Please stop!" I sobbed as I began futilely pushing against his chest. As he's done previously, he whispered soft shushing noises as he brushed a few tears from my face. "Not like this, Beau... please, not like this." I pleaded again.

Leaning down, Beau whispered into my ear "You're so wet and ready for me, Love, I just can't hold back anymore." Without wasting another second Beau plunged himself inside of my virgin pussy, I yelped loudly and grabbed onto him as I tried to adjust to the intrusion. "Fuck!" He exclaimed heatedly. "God, Stella, you're so tight... it feels so fucking good." He said as he pushed himself even deeper inside of me, I dug my nails into his back as my pussy tried to accommodate his size. Beau slowly pulled out of me and looked to where we were connected, I noticed his eyes widen in shock after seeing a hint of blood on his cock. "Stella, is this your first time?" He said with trepidation, unable to speak and unwilling to look him in the face, I buried my face into his chest and nodded. "I'm sorry..." He said slowly. "If I had known, I would have been more gentle." He said, his voice filled with concern, as he leaned over to try and see my face he pushed his cock back into me again, I let out a low pleasure-filled moan and felt my virginal walls contract around his impressive shaft. At that, he gave me a lopsided grin clearly recognizing that I was feeling pleasure, despite it being my first time. Beau then began a slow and steady rhythm, gently pushing himself in and out of my pussy. One of his hands moved back up to my breast where he began rolling and pinching the nipple between his fingers, his other hand moved down to my clitoris where he began rubbing it gently. I was wracked with pleasure and moaning absentmindedly, at that moment, I didn't care about the circumstances or situation, all that I wanted was for him to fuck me.

After just a few minutes, Beau began thrusting harder and faster, his rigid member reaching the deepest parts of my pussy as he made love to me with vigor. I felt my climax building as his movements became more sporadic and less controlled. Suddenly, with a quick and strong thrust, Beau roughly shoved his entire length inside of me and began filling me with his seed, the sensation of being filled with his cum sent me over the edge and I had the most intense orgasm that I'd ever experienced. As we both simultaneously came down from our highs, it was obvious that we were both overwhelmed by the immense pleasure that we had just experienced. We stayed as we were for some time, our sweaty bodies joined in a pleasant embrace, both his cock and my pussy intermittently twitching, as we tried to catch our breath.

"You were amazing, Love." Beau barely managed to whisper, as he pulled his now flaccid cock out of my still sensitive pussy. "I can't wait to do it again." He said softly as he placed a gentle kiss on my forehead. Beau then laid down next to me, his chest facing my back, with no hesitation he draped his arm over me and then proceeded to pull me against his chest. Exhausted both mentally and physically, I was asleep within minutes.

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A little note:

This is the updated version of the original After Hours, I find it to be a bit more satisfactory and I hope that those of you who read the original version agree. Feel free to leave comments or message me with your thoughts, I love the feedback (and the discussions) that being said if you have criticism please keep it constructive and refrain from rude comments. I'll try to update as often as I can, however I don't have a specific schedule, you can follow me to receive notifications if you'd like. Thanks!

I'd also like to make something very clear: this story is entirely fiction, nothing about it is true and it's not meant to be realistic or a novel-type story. This is just my own fucked up fantasy :)

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HighBrowHighBrow8 months ago

While you’re enjoying this sick fantasy, imagine our heroine is your best friend, your fiancėe, your wife, daughter, mother, granddaughter, aunt, sister-in-law, anyone you know and love….

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good job. I rated 5 stars. Please write more.

kicekicealmost 2 years ago

The only thing that seems missing to me is a description of Beau's room. Both in comparison to her room and as a little more description of each brother individually. Maybe why are they in his room and not hers?

MsBHaiVingMsBHaiVingover 2 years ago

I gave you five stars but I bet I would have liked your original version just as much. I say that because sometimes there's an enticement to 'spice things up' if my experience is anything to go on. Of course I might have it all wrong; perhaps you made your changes to pages 1 and 2 and page 3 was always as it is. I have to admit that I only skimmed page 3 so far. I was actually attracted to your story first, by your interesting user-name (so where are the poems) and second, I just thought the story was really well written - the setting came alive for me and I started to attach to your protagonist. The plot was of interest to me too because sometimes my fantasies follow along the same lines - unfortunately I only have certain moods for certain fantasies and it's not always easy to line them up like ducks in a row. Luckily, I can read this again at a future date but for now I can appreciate it as just good writing. I see you have only written one story per year for this publishing site. If you publish elsewhere, please put it in your profile. It's like having a baby though, isn't it. Nine months to grow it and at least 3 more to recover from the upheaval of birth. Lol. Take care. Keep writing.

MissedLifeMissedLifeabout 3 years ago

Has caught my attention. Well written and I am looking forward to seeing where you take this.

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