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All Comments on 'After-Party'

by thewintersofaugust

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jpb531jpb531about 11 years ago
Short but sweet

I liked it.

dewdropdewdewdropdewabout 11 years ago
Delicious

Simply delicious, definitely could have been longer.

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdabout 11 years ago
I liked it

Short but good. Could do with a little word-smithing. But overall, quite nice.

tvoldietvoldieabout 11 years ago
Very good . . . but . . .

A very good story, very good, but please use a spell/grammar checker in future.

OliviaBeaumontOliviaBeaumontabout 11 years ago
From Olivia

I liked it too thought I had better check it out as it features my name sake !!

Olivia

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

I came aboot 5 times yay wee hoe

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