All Comments on 'After School Meeting Ch. 03'

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Breeding time?

And now that you are staying with her overnight, perhaps you need to breed her, also in Chapter 4 or 5, because regardless of the differences in your ages, the two of you are falling in love?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
What's Really Going On?

I would like it if you stopped making it so wham bam thank you mam.I know that he doesn't have that much experience but damn this is moving too fast.And to the other person who has commented could you stop using the term breed,it just sounds dumb as hell.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great Story

Keep Writing about this same story

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