All Comments on 'After The Party'

I stopped reading when he said it was okay for the cab driver to come in. A little fantasy is alright but lets not get fucking ridiculous. I knew then this story was going to go far past anything possible in real life.

I read a tad further than Anonymous. Then I gave it up too.

Everyone knows your stupid ass can't read

Everyone knows your stupid ass can't read

I love a good wife like this.

How about you change that to "you're a slut"? Why would he touch her diseased cunt with a ten foot pole? Her cunt is infested with who knows how many stds.

1 star

Even a story about a nasty whore should be better than this.

Way over the top and the writing was really amateurish. 1*.