All Comments on 'After the Rally'

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JacobLucasJacobLucasover 3 years ago
Not the End?

Please tell me this is not the end. Seems like a good setup to continue in several ways.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

I am truly hoping there is a part two to this story, made some good exciting reading

eh9198eh9198about 2 years ago

Fuck yes this is the type of thing I read Lit for. Please continue this story. PLEASE don’t let hubby enjoy this. That’s all LW is these days.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great writing, particularly the first scene

TabauthorTabauthorover 1 year ago

really felt the first scene was realistic, great work!

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