All Comments on 'After The School Day'

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SelectReduxSelectReduxabout 1 month ago

'Here's a koan for you...' Had to look that up and learned something new. As a reader, it's good to be surprised.

Very engaging and enjoyable, a well-imagined and original piece of writing, far above the usual standard here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Never made it clear who Sam is...story is also sexual cold...three stars.

maddictmaddictabout 1 month ago

Sam, you da Man. To pump a bitch in heat like Ms Turner oh just burn her hard. Young lady your next will your panties be wet all day

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This could be an Owned Teacher for Becky as she sees a wonderful opportunity to take over Mrs Bethany Turner as she is caught fucking Sam. Bethany's needle dick husband cannot beat what Sam can do.

Like the owned teacher chaqracter, Becky would take charge of Mrs Bethany Turner by ordering her to sexually remove her bra and panties and throw them in the can for the black janitor to take home to smell and masturbate. Becky starts ordering Bethany to start licking Sam's huge cocks before putting it under Becky to ride harder. Both Becky and Sam humiliate Bethany by making her compete with Becky fir Sam's huge cocks.

Ownership over Bethany is totally as Becky makes Bethany suck the black janitor+s huge cocks as she is converted to sucking black cock while Becky has Dam as her boyfriend .

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