All Comments on 'After was the Beginning'

by yellowjacket66

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Bronco56Bronco56about 1 year ago

Great start. I enjoyed it. Please continue. 5stars

Vstar67Vstar67about 1 year ago

Ok, let’s hear what happens in the hotel room and after please!

phlxxlphlxxlabout 1 year ago

Nice little Story. A follow up about what happens in the hotel and maybe in the long run would bei nice.

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKabout 1 year ago
liked it

hope you do another chapter or more!

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

....... Incredible...!! *5*

Jimbo_NamJimbo_Namabout 1 year ago

Interesting premise…

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

........ Incredible *5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
So the wedding couple is now step brother_step sister

So the wedding couple is now step brother _step sister. From hotel they should telephone their son and daughter ad give them the news how their father and mother are being screwed as they are "consumating" their marriage.

Catcher78Catcher7825 days ago

Great story why not love? They both deserve and need each other.

juststujuststu24 days ago

good start but wheres the rest

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