All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

by DelishuslySynful

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
ok, but...

slide = slid

breath = breathe

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very nice!

there's nothing wrong with a little fun.,sex doesn't have to be all grunt and squeal.

DelishuslySynfulDelishuslySynfulover 11 years agoAuthor
::smile::

I hope I've lived up to your expectations.

William smythWilliam smythabout 12 years ago
Nice first story

Lives right up to the authors pen name. Hopefully there will soon be more stories from this talented writer.

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